The feedback I received was both positive and helpful. Both Cameron Dodds and James Blundell gave me things to improve on as well as complemented things I had already accomplished.
Cameron started out by acknowledging that I had created entries that were well thought out and reflective.
He then mentioned a major flaw in my work, the lack of referencing. This is something I have had trouble getting used to throughout the course. After the mistake had been brought to my attention I endeavored to go through my works and add references where necessary.
Another flaw Cameron pointed out was some grammatical, punctuation, spelling and sentence structure issues in my work. He stated “However, some, for example, the following sentence from the Digital Information post: “We have resources like the world wide web, social media sites such Facebook and Twitter, and even newspapers and magazines, which originally provided us with information in a non-technological format, are being published both by paper and online” could have been constructed better. There is also a word missing in the same sentence.” After reading this comment I instantly rectified the mistake. As well as this I proofread all of my other entries in order to correct any other mistakes I may have made.
One major thing Cameron brought to my attention was that my lesson plan, although interesting and engaging, was impossible for the age group selected. In the lesson they are told to use Pinterest. Cameron pointed out you have to be at least 13 to create an account. I was worried about this fact so I contacted my tutor who advised me not to change the lesson plan at this late stage.
James was very encouraging in his feedback. He complemented the simplicity and easy to follow nature of my entries.
He suggested although I had quite thoughtful entries, I tried to “squeeze too much in” and that I could perhaps try to focus on one or two ideas in depth. Although I appreciated this comment, I decided to stick with my original entries as I felt it would be too hard to change them all to suit this request.
Lastly he commented on my word count. I had already known I was over the word count so I went back through my works and cut out a lot of unnecessary parts in order to meet the requirements.
Overall the feedback was very helpful.